In my first writing I wrote about my experience going to warped tour. I had a very hard time thinking of how i should write it and what kind of words i scould use to describe that experience. The essay was the hardest one for me and it also is the shittiest one that i wrote all semester. I can tell that I didnt know what I was doing and that I didnt have any type of style tat all to my writing yet. My second essay i wrote was about ataste. I told about the taste of mint chocolate chi pice creap. I can tell that my writing improeved just from the first essay that I wrote till this one. The words I used to describe the taste and if it had a smell were much more intelligent than the ones that I used for my first essay.. My third essay was about the smeell of fresh cut cgrass. It basically told a story about my childhood summers and the things that I spend doing with my friends. These memories always bring back to me the smell of hte fresh cut grass. I found itVERY hard to describe this smell because it smells good, yet kind of weird. this was sucha hard essay for me to write and it was probably my other least vavorite besides my first essay. My nexct two essays were definitely much better than the first and third. They described alot and sounded like they came from my heart more than hte others. They show me that my writing has significantly improved and that as I continue to write, i really do become a better writer. I cant write anymore. My head hurts too much and my nose is runny. I hate when marlen makes us keep typing and typing and typing and typing. After this I have to work from 10 until 4:30. That is fucking disgusting. I hate that i have to work alllll reaking day long. I was supposed to work at 8am but i do not feel well at all so I told them i could not come in until after this class. This has absolutely nothing to do with my writing but i feel like shit and I cant think about it right now. When Marlen asked me what is i
